Blog feedback and Learner response

WWW: Some good work that shows you are recalling and building on the work you did in GCSE 

Media a couple of years ago. Your 50 Cent RBK advert analysis contains some thoughtful points.

EBI: Blog formatting is poor in places - text not possible to read. You need to check and improve this. Some of your posts lack depth and detail - that is so crucial at A Level. Your Shreddies analysis is a good example - most of what you write is simply describing the advert (or denotation) rather than analysing it (connotation). Your media consumption post is worrying - far too many errors (interent?) and apparently you watch 200-500 hours of TV a week? Are you sure? This is lazy so early in the year...

LR: Reflect on your first month of AS Media. What is your strongest piece of work so far? What is 

your weakest? What specific skills or knowledge do you need to develop over the rest of the course?